It’s here! One of my favorite new Halloween traditions: Susanna Leonard Hills’s Halloweensie Contest!
There’s still time to enter! The contest closes at 11:59pm on Halloween. Details here. Good luck to all — especially my wonderful critique partners!
And now, my entry …. coming in at 97 words (and after about 97 candy corns):
The Misunderstood Ghost
By Karen LaSalvia
As a ghost, trick-or-treaters often misunderstand me.
When I smile …
“Help! It wants to swallow me!”
When I hug …
“Ahhh! It’s sliming me!”
And when I say, “Hi, I’m Hauntington,” they hear, “Howwlll Haunnnntttt!”
I give them the heebie-sheebie shivers.
But then …
“Meow. Hi, Hauntington.”
“You understand me?!”
“I speak three languages, including Ghost.”
“Vanishing vapors! But why are you hiding in a cauldron?”
“Kids say I’m a bad-luck black cat. Oh no, I’m seen!”
“Stand back. I got this!”
I smile, hug, and speak to each trick-or-treater.
“You scared them with kindness!”
She totally understands me.
Great job, Karen. And congrats again on your blog and website!
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Thanks, Rose! 🙂
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I’m so glad the ghost found a friend 🙂
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👻 Thanks for reading!
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I’m so glad Hauntington found a friend! Love heebie-sheebie shivers!
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Thanks, Becky! Yay, friends!
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Karen, best of luck with your fun entry. And, so happy for you getting your website up. It looks great!
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Thank you! 🙂 It’s a weight off my mind! That much closer to querying.
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Thank goodness black cat speaks ghost! Cute story. Good luck!
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Thank you! 🎃
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I too like your “heebie sheebie shivers.” But most of all I love the idea “of scaring them with kindess.” Great friendship story! Love the cat. Good luck.
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So glad you liked the ending! Thanks for reading and commenting. 🙂
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Good job. You gots to love you a story with a black cat and a character ho finds him a pal.
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Thanks! Love your profile icon!
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Great story! Very cute entry, best of luck!
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Thanks! Good luck to you, too. So many great entries this year!
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Scaring with kindness is the best. Good luck!
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Love the concept of scaring with kindness! Cute story!
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Great language in here and a cute story!
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Ah! Two misunderstood misfits finding friendship together! Very nice, Karen! Like everyone else, I love the idea of scaring with kindness – such misunderstanding! Thanks for joining in the Halloweensie fun!
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Thank you 🙂 And thanks so much for hosting this contest every year. It’s so much fun and always gets me in the Halloween spirit reading the entries.
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Lovely story of friendship and understanding.
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